mrty's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Randys Jail Break]

Just a bit more work...

First of all, I liked the concept of the game. Kinda reminded me of Ray, which was awesome. Well, I think this is inspired from Ray. Anyway, I liked the graphics, drawing, the animation and stuff, but you could have worked more on the scene where Randy has fist fight with those other prisoners, because that scene kinda sucked. I mean, just a few hits and all of em were lying on the floor. I deducted a point because of that.

The game had some missplellings, you wrote "randy" instead of "Randy" most of the time. Like some other guy said, the text, at times, didn't match what was happening. He didn't sneak behind the guy to stabbed him, he ran up to him. And in the scene where the alarm was activated, he didn't really "Walk casually and pretend to be a police officer." Instead, he pretended to be a police officer and commanded the other officers to run, or whatever you call it. Another point is deducted because of that.

The most annoying thing was that you had to restart the game everytime you lose, and you couldn't even skip the cutscenes. Please add some checkpoints next time. One more point deducted.

Another thing I would like to put my finger on is that I think you tried to make this a "choose your own adventure" game, but you didn't really get to choose your own adventure. The storyline was linear except for what you would choose to kill people (fighting or killing). Also, the fact that you added the option "Shoot him in the head" in the interrogation scene was pretty stupid, mainly because it already says "You shouldn't beat him too much." at the top.

I liked this game, but it could have been a lot better. I would like to see some sequels.

[Falling in Love]

Too hard, and buggy.

It has a good concept, and the gameplay is nice, but the controls are too hard, and it's improbable to collect all 100 hearts. (You may have done it, but you are the one who made the game after all, everyone can beat his/her own game easily.) I think you have to make it less challenging.

As for the bugs, yeah, I encountered some. When you go out of the scene, if you go left, you appear on the right side of the screen (I don't know if it's actually a bug but it doesn't make sense.), and I once suddenly popped up on the right side of the screen while I was on the left side at the end of the game where you fall near the girl. It sure is an original game, though.

[Jump_or_Die]

I found a bug.

Sorry for the low score, but I jumped, the gun was fired, everything was stopped but the guy kept jumping. I had to restart the game.

ganoncrazy responds:

Im sorry for the inconvenience!

[Avoid the Spikes!]

Okay.

First of all, why didn't minusnick submit this by himself? Because he was ashamed? Because he was banned? I don't mean to be offensive but whoever minusnick was, it looks like he was way too lazy to make a "Replay" button. He just wrote "RE" and added the "PLAY" button at the end of it.

Now I hate people who try to be proud of how quick they made a game. This flash may have been made in 15 minutes but it's nothing to be proud of. I assume that minusnick was proud of it as he wrote it in the main menu. I know another person who's proud of making games quickly and I still hate him.

The game was simple and had nothing special. If I'm giving this flash only one star, and if it's actually Minusnick who made this, I'm giving it because he at least tried, and I'm giving it to him, not you. It's really disgraceful to say "YOU SUCK!!!" at the end even if you get a high score. And don't you think you should have given Minusnick credit while submitting this? In fact, he deserves like %90 of the credit.

[improved shoot em up]

Needs much more work.

The idea is good, but try adding some music, sound effects, background, and please change the title. You might also try adding a single player mode, with multiple levels, as I don't think anybody will invite his friend over to just play this game. It has potential, you can do it a lot better. Good luck.

[Spliter]

Pretty good and original.

The gameplay was good and fun, I really enjoyed it, but you might try adding some enemies, because it gets boring after some time. Try adding some music, also.

[Sift Heads 4]

Enjoyable but flawed

It seemed fine for the first time but you get ABSOLUTELY no clue about who the target is. I never thought i had to shoot the "girls" drinks. The sound that plays when you start a mission is really annoying and i have to listen it everytime.

Machine guns and rifles are useless. Machine guns just decrease your rank because it shoots too many bullets, and the rifle provides nothing more than a worse view. There isn't even a way to zoom in/out. I can beat the whole game with Beretta.

Also, in the level with the mountain, when you shoot the sign, the politician should fall to his death, but he doesn't die. When i first played the game, i thought i killed the politician right there, but nothing happened. He doesn't even move, so what is the point of shooting a huge rock to kill him? Just to make sure he's dead?

It's glitchy, also. In the "Late night" mission, if i shoot the power box in the wrong time, the car can still get in. And how the hell could i ever found out that i had to shoot the right guy's arm when he's taking a bite? There are so many levels that i had to use a walkthrough.

Overall result, not a good sequel. I liked Sift Heads but this wasn't good. I liked the 3D animations. I liked the idea of going to different missions around the world, but the diffuculty and the "glitchyness" of the game ruined the idea.

[Windows Doors Demo]

Beta review

Nice try! Didn't except this to turn out this good=)
To make it nicer:
- In word or excel, when you click save, have it say something like "Windows was unable to save this document because it sucks too much."
- In MyTrueLove, when you click "find your match", have it go to a page with a picture of a donkey and a message "You two match perfectly!"
- It may be tough, but try to fix the back and forward buttons on the internet.
- Have more people to chat with, and with different topics.
It was excellent otherwise. I really liked the jokes in Norton. I hope i have been a good beta reviewer for your game. I never did it before.

Archawn responds:

You're great at beta testing! I'll call on you again if I need anymore comments!

[Pico's School remake]

Nice game.

Good idea, a 3D remake, but i guess i like the original one better. The original was an adventure&shooting game, which was pretty fun, this one didn't actually feel like a shooting or adventure, selecting the items is kinda hard, and Pico runs slowly, wish he was scripted to be faster. So, i enjoyed the game, it had a few flaws, and i would stick with the original.