Bad grammar, good story... I liked part 1 better, though. It was more interesting.
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You should have grabbed his cock.
Short chapters...
Dezimo
these stories are pretty good ^^
the writing isn't spectacular but i guess english isn't your first language :P
keep it up anyway :)