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Assassins (Chaper 3: Big Mistake)

Posted by mrty - May 18th, 2008


Jack was sitting in the cabin. Eric woke up.
Eric: "Man, what the fuck was that for?!"
Jack: "Well, since we consider you always ruining my plans and always trying to change my mind, i just made a preventation, that's all."
Eric: "You fucking idiot! Go to freaking hell! My head is banging right now!"
Jack: "Relax, Eric! If you have a headache, just have some rest instead of bitching!"
Eric: "Wait a minute...What did you do while i was lying here?"
Jack: "Just sent Rufio to ask my parents if they are OK."

Eric stood up suddenly. "What?!" he shouted. "You piece of crap! I can't believe you! He's gonna call the police! Jesus, did you really think that he's gonna do what you said?"

Jack charged to Eric, grabbed his collar, and pointed his gun to Eric's head. "You really pissed me off this time. Why don't you just die and let me relax for some time?"
Eric: "Are you out of your mind? Get that gun out of my face! Can't you understand, we will both end up in the jail just because of a seriously big mistake you made!"

Eric was stunned. "Hey...You hear that?" Jack approached to the door. "Guess so...It's a police car."
Eric was enraged. "Just because of you! Now we are finished, and just because of you! Son of a bitch!"

Jack grabbed Eric and pushed him towards the wall. Eric bumped his head and fell down. "Hey...Jack...There is a trapdoor under my bed!" "I hope you are not joking." said Jack. They pushed the bed to the wall, grabbed their equipment and rushed down the stairs of the trapdoor.

To be continued...

Assassins (Chaper 3: Big Mistake)


Comments

wow thats good.

Thanks! Have you read the previous chapters?

Pretty good. I liked 1 better. It's my favorite of all!

Well probably because that's where the action begins! :)

Read the comment I left on the first chapter

This one is better then chapter 2 dude nice since it's your second language

Yeah thanks!

hey, this is pretty good.
its also your 47th post.
47!!!

Haha yeah, 47th post :)